Gift shop

[Indolentlynx]

I just finish setting up my site and need some feedback's. appreciated

[Indolentlynx]

website: https://www.indolentlynxgift.com/

[Thevioletfox · Accepted solution]

Hey @Indolentlynx 

I think your homepage looks great! The pictures are high quality and you've done a great job with blocking!

The video on your homepage is beautiful, but I will say, it's very short.  If I'm going to hit play, I kinda want to see more than 4 seconds of music and a hand moving. Can you expand on this?

Your Featured Item (After My Own Heart perfume) - the section is VERY large on my screen.  You may want to check that out and resize a bit.

Your colors are really gorgeous - love them! 

I did notice a few places (home page and about) where the text needs to have the first letter of the sentence capitalized.  So you may want to go through your text with a fine-tooth comb and just proofread one more time.

This is totally personal preference - and I'm old so I don't know what's "cool" anymore, but I would want a more professional picture on the About page.  Again, I'm old and totally not hip so ignore me if I'm totally off base here.

Overall though, I think it looks really nice! Good job! 🙂

[Indolentlynx]

Thank you, I have taken some of your feedback & redid my shop. It's not the best but you're welcome to check it out.

check it out: https://www.indolentlynxgift.com/